“Davey,
wake up!” his mother called from down the hall.
As he slowly sat up in bed and rubbed his eyes he thought about how much
he was looking forward to the day. A
smile came across his face as he thought about the picnic at the park. Even though he was eagerly anticipating the
events of the day, waking up was never fun.
Nevertheless, it wasn’t long before he was up and dressed (he decided on
shorts and a t-shirt with a dragon picture on it).
Davey
moved into the living room where his mom was tying Janie’s shoes. “Good to see you up, Davey,” she said looking
up at him. “Why don’t you go into the
kitchen to see if your dad needs any help with the food.” She then turned and looked at his little
brother, who was in the act of sneaking up on the sleeping cat. “Barry, what have you been told about
bothering Sprinkles?” Davey left without
hearing his brother’s response. In the
kitchen, his dad was packing the cooler with food for the trip to the park.
“Hey
there, kiddo,” his dad said with a smile.
“Ready for a fun Labor Day barbeque?”
“Oh,
yeah,” Davey said with a broad grin.
“I’m going to eat more hotdogs than anyone else!”
“Really? Even more than Janie?”
Davey
scoffed at the very idea. “Dad, she’s
three. She’ll have one.”
“Okay. So, do you think you’ll have more than
Barry?”
Davey
was seeing where his dad was going with this conversation and decided to jump
to the conclusion. “Yup, I’ll even eat
more than you.” As he said this, he
looked wryly his father, waiting for him to be shocked at his challenge.
“Oh,
my! Well, I’ll need to pack extra
pickles to go with all the hotdogs you’ll be eating.” Davey’s face twisted into a mask of
disgust. “Alright, more pickles for me
then. Can you grab the hotdog buns over
on the table?”
As
Davey obeyed the request, he heard his mom call from the living room. “Walt, are you finished in there?”
“Just
about,” was the response from Davey’s dad as he finished packing the cooler by
placing the blue plastic ice pack in it and shutting the lid. Having finished with the cooler, he packed
the non-food items like plates and napkins, as well as a bag of potato chips
and the buns that Davey had brought over, into a red plastic basket. With both containers packed, Davey’s dad pick
up the cooler and asked Davey to grab the basket and follow him out to the car.
As
they walked out of the kitchen and into the garage, Davey thought about how
much he liked helping his dad. It made
him feel like the big kid that he knew he was, but it also seemed like his dad
enjoyed his help as well. By the time
the cooler and basket were in the trunk next to a bag of charcoal and Davey’s
dad had closed the trunk with a THUNK, Davey spoke up.
“Dad,
I was thinking about today and how you are going to cook the hotdogs.”
“Yeah,”
his dad said with enthusiasm, “I know that you said you were going to eat more
than anyone else.”
“Uh-huh. Well, I was thinking about it, and I think
that I should help you cook them.”
“Whoa,”
Davey’s dad said. He crouched down to
better look Davey in the eye. “I know
that you want to help, but the grill can be very dangerous. I don’t want you to have an accident and hurt
yourself. I think the best way that you
can help me is by playing with your brother and sister and keeping them away
from the grill.”
“No,
Dad,” Davey said with conviction. “I’m a
big kid. I can handle it. You should let me help.”
“Yes,
you are a big kid, but you still aren’t a grown-up. Only grown-ups can work the grill.”
Davey
could feel himself changing. This had
happened before when things wouldn’t go the way he expected them to. He felt … hot inside. And he would make his hands into fists
without thinking about it. His mouth
felt tight and he would clench his teeth.
He knew that the feeling was called anger, but it was different for him
than other people. When Davey got angry,
it was like he was a different person.
With
his dad still looking at him, Davey started to argue.
“Bobby
Templeton’s dad let him cook on their grill and he’s only six-and-a-half,”
Davey said defiantly.
“Bobby
Templeton’s dad is not your dad. You
mother and I don’t want to take the risk of you hurting yourself. It’s better to be cautious than sorry. We’re only looking out for you.”
“Dad,
you’re being so mean!” Davey was raising his voice now. “I’m seven-and-three-quarters and I’m old
enough to help you!”
Davey’s
dad stood up and looked at him sternly.
“You do not raise your voice in the house; you know better than
that. Now, I’ve explained to you why it
won’t work and you need to accept it.
Come inside and wait while we finish getting ready.” Davey, getting angrier by the moment stomped
his feet loudly as he went inside. His
dad called after him, “Stop stomping, Davey.”
Davey didn’t care what his dad said.
He was old enough to help! His
dad was just being mean for no reason.
When
Davey got inside, Barry was crawling on the floor of the living room, pushing a
toy car and making engine noises with his mouth. Davey was so mad at his dad that when he saw
Barry having fun, it just made him angrier.
Before he could even think about what he was doing, Davey stepped on
Barry’s hand that was controlling the toy and then twisted his foot. Barry screamed and started crying. The boys’ mother rushed in and started
shouting.
“Davey! What are you doing?!” She quickly picked up Barry and looked at his
injured hand. “Why would you do that,
Davey?” Before Davey could answer, she
immediately sent him to his room.
Davey’s
change was complete. He stomped off to
his room, angry at everything. He was
angry at his dad for not letting him help cook, he was angry at Barry for
having fun (for some reason), and he was also angry at himself for losing
control again. When he got to his room,
he slammed the door closed and sat on his bed breathing heavily.
He
could hear Barry still crying and his mom and dad talking about how Davey was
out of control again and what would they do about him. He wanted to take it back or at least say he
was sorry, but he knew that he couldn’t do that. He didn’t know why he couldn’t, but he knew
that apologizing wasn’t an option. He
just didn’t want to be there anymore.
Davey got up from his bed and opened his closet door, went inside, and
closed the door behind him. He wished
that he could be somewhere else because he had caused so much trouble and he
didn’t even know why.
After
a few minutes, Davey noticed that he couldn’t hear his mom and dad talking or
Barry crying anymore. That probably
meant that his punishment was going to start now. Probably no TV for a week and he would have
to do all of Barry's chores, too. But
his dad (who always laid out the punishments) never came in. Davey started to worry that maybe they left
for the park without him. His anger now
panic, Davey threw open the door to his closet and was about to run in to the
living room when he saw that his room was different. His bed and desk and other furniture were
gone, as were the walls and the ceiling and even the floor. It looked like he was in some sort of cave
that was filled with gold. The only
light came from some torches on the walls of the cave that was bigger than his
whole house. Not knowing what else to
do, he walked toward the gold, which was made up of coins and armor and
scepters and dishes and was all heaped in a big pile, and called out: “Hello?”
Suddenly,
the pile started shifting and Davey could hear a muffled voice speaking from
beneath it. “Whffs drre?” the muffled
voice said as the pile continued to move.
Suddenly, the gold erupted with the head of large, red dragon. The dragon had a long, serpentine neck and was
covered in scales with two large, bony horns coming out of the top of its head before
curling around the sides (the horns reminded Davey of a bighorn ram’s). Its mouth was filled with long white teeth
that poked out of the sides of its mouth even when it was closed. As the dragon’s head finished emerging, it
blinked its heavy eyelids and yawned with its massive jaws (which sent out a
small fireball towards the ceiling). While
seeing all of this, Davey wasn’t afraid; he was awestruck.
“Cool!”
Davey exclaimed.
The
dragon looked over at Davey with its large yellow eyes and spoke with a deep
voice. “Who are you and what are you
doing in my cave? You haven’t come for
my gold, have you?”
“My
name is David Walter Greene with an E at the end, but I go by Davey. I don’t know how I got here and I don’t want
your gold. Are you really a
dragon?” Davey could barely contain his
excitement.
“Of
course I’m a dragon,” said the dragon, a little annoyed. “My name is Granpaugh and I was enjoying a
nap buried under my gold until you came in.”
“Your
name is Grandpa?” Davey asked. “That’s
weird.”
“Really?”
Granpaugh asked with one big eyebrow raised.
“How many other dragons have you met?”
“Um,
none others,” Davey said lamely. “I
mean, you’re the first one I’ve met.”
“So,
if you’ve never met any other dragons, how do you know that Granpaugh is a
‘weird’ name?”
“Uh,
I guess I don’t.”
“As
a matter of fact,” the dragon said smugly, “Granpaugh is a perfectly good
dragon name.”
“Sorry,
sir,” Davey said, wanting to make friends with the very first dragon he had
ever met.
“Anyway,”
Granpaugh said, changing the subject, “if you’re not here to steal my gold then
what are you doing here?”
“Actually,”
Davey said, “I don’t know how I got here.
I was in my closet and when I came out, I was here.”
“That
explains why there’s a closet here now.”
Davey turned to look and saw that his closet was sitting in the cave,
unconnected to the house where it belonged.
The dragon continued: “I think what happened was that some magical
energy got near you while you were in the closet. Did you make any wishes while you were in
there?”
Davey
thought for a moment. “Yeah, I wished
that I was not at my home.”
Granpaugh
nodded. “Magic tends to be attracted to
strong emotions. Had you recently done
anything that made you feel especially happy or sad?”
Davey
suddenly remembered his argument with his dad and the following tantrum. He looked at the floor of the cave, feeling
ashamed. “Yeah, I was just sent to my
room for hurting my brother, Barry, and I just wanted to get away.”
“I
think that’s it. You feeling bad about
being sent to your room, combined with your wish, brought you here. Well, Davey, the energy that brought you here
needs a few minutes to reset before it can take you back. Why did you hurt your brother? Did he steal your gold?”
“No,” Davey said, feeling bad for what he had
done. “He didn’t do anything to me.”
“So,
why did you hurt him?” asked Granpaugh.
“I
don’t know. I was mad at my dad for not
letting me help cook the hotdogs for the picnic and when I saw Barry having fun
it made me even more mad. I don’t know
why I get angry like that. I just do.”
Granpaugh
looked at Davey thoughtfully. After a
moment he spoke. “I think I know
why. My sister used to hurt me when she
was mad so that I would feel just as bad as her. I was too small to fight back, so I would
hide in our clan’s pile of gold.” Davey
nodded. He would get angry and would
just lash out so that other people would feel bad, too. Something else that the dragon said made
Davey think.
“Is
that why you like gold so much, because you used to hide in it?”
“Maybe,”
Granpaugh said, looking bashful. “Girl
dragons are bigger than boy dragons, so hiding was easier than facing her. The world can be scary, but you always know
what to expect with gold.”
Davey
saw how similar his experience was to Granpaugh’s, though Davey was
more like Granpaugh’s sister. “Maybe,”
Davey said, “she feels just as bad about what happened as you do, but she’s
afraid to say anything. Maybe if you
talked to her, she’ll say that she’s sorry.”
Grandpaugh
looked uncertain. “I don’t know. I don’t want her to hurt me again.”
“Well,
I feel bad about hurting my brother and I want to say sorry when I see him
again. Maybe your sister feels the same
way.”
“Maybe
...” Granpaugh said, his voice sounding more optimistic.
Suddenly,
Davey noticed a bright light coming from behind him. He turned to look and saw that his closet had
a bright blue glow surrounding it.
“Quickly,”
Granpaugh said sternly, “get back in your closet and wish to go back home.”
Davey
ran back towards his closet, but paused before going through the doorway. “Will I ever see you again, Granpaugh?”
“I
don’t know, but if you don’t go right now, you could be trapped here and I’m
not sharing my gold.”
Davey
smiled at the dragon being so protective about his gold once again. He took a deep breath and went through the
doorway, closing the door behind him.
Once inside, Davey closed his eyes and wished to be back home. When he opened his eyes, he could hear his
dad call his name. He opened the door to
his closet and continued out of his room.
When
he got to the living room, his dad was sitting on the couch waiting for him.
“Davey,”
his dad said, “why were you sent to your room?”
“Because
I hurt Barry,” Davey said calmly. “I was
angry that I couldn’t help you cook and when I saw Barry having fun, I wanted
him to unhappy like me.”
Davey’s
dad looked a bit surprised. “Alright,”
he said, “it sounds like you’ve thought about this. You can’t take out your bad feelings on other
people. Now, you need to apologize to
Barry.”
“Okay.”
“And
try not to take out your anger out on other people.”
“I’ll
try,” said Davey. “I don’t want to hurt
people anymore.”
After
a heartfelt apology, Davey was told what his punishment would be for hurting his
brother: no TV and he had to do extra chores around the house, but only for two
days.
Despite the chaos of the morning, the
family was still able to enjoy a fun time together at the park. Davey played with Barry and Janie and helped
to keep them away from the hot barbeque, which was a way of helping his dad
cook. But he still didn’t eat any
pickles.
THE
END
2 comments:
i wanted to read your story, im sure it is really creative but its long and has no pictures so all i read was "THE END." I liked that part it gave me an odd sense of closure, very unexpected in the most expected way. bravo bravo!
It is a bit long, but not terribly so (it has a lot of dialogue). I would actually like to add some pictures eventually, but, beside it not being ready for illustrations yet, I can't draw. Know someone that can?
Thanks for the comment!
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