I wrote most of this story while working at the temp job a couple of weeks back. It has some VERY SUBTLE symbolism that seemed appropriate for today.
This hunt had lasted a
few weeks, with little sign that his prey was close. In his youth, he had
stalked his prey, but he now realized that wasn’t terribly practical – with
each prey that came near, he’d have to change so much about his behavior to get
close, and that was exhausting. So instead, he now puts out bait and sits,
waiting.
Very subtly, Argus
felt the air shift. The other creatures of the forest became very still and the
silence that stayed behind was palpable. Now, the true test began. Argus
gripped his lariat in his right hand, using only his forefinger to keep the
loop in place, the excess cord held loosely in his left hand. All of his
attention was focused on watching the tree line for his prey and being ready to
pounce.
With little warning,
four creatures exploded into the sky from the forest canopy. They flew without
wings, propelled by some unknown force. Argus had only the briefest of moments
to decide which prey to pursue. He could have chosen the fastest or the biggest
one, but Argus had studied these creatures and knew that the best one to go
after was simply the closest one. He adjusted his stance to a crouch and
watched the flying creatures’ flight pattern. As soon as a creature was in
range, Argus let his lariat fly. The cord found a home around the end of the
long, rat-like tail and Argus let the coiled excess spill out. He watched the
cord fly out after the lead and jumped from the tree just as the cord pulled his
chest harness it was attached to.
This is where the hunt
really got exciting, Argus thought as he climbed the cord up towards the
creature. This close to his prey, he could see the details up close. The scales
that covered its body were large and shimmering in the early morning light. The
two limbs it had in place of arms were short numbs with a long, single claw
attached to the ends. From his current position below and behind, he couldn’t
see the head, but they all look about the same with their rodent-like teeth
obscured by large, full lips and their soulless, black eyes, staring into nothingness.
Truly, they are fearsome creatures to behold and many hunters have been
intimidated on their first encounter, but Argus had grown accustomed to the
chase.
He quickly scaled the
cord and was soon climbing on to the creature itself. He had to move carefully
to not cut himself on the sides of the large, hand-sized scales. His heavy
boots and gloves provided some protection, but even some hunters that wore full
armor had lost a limb simply to the scales. Every preparation in the world
would mean nothing if one was careless in the moment. To help lend some
stability, Argus pulled his pickaxe from its holster at the back of his belt.
It was made from a previous kill’s claw, which was incredibly strong. With each
swing of the axe down into the side of his prey, slowly moving Argus forward,
the creature cried out with high-pitched, whistle-like screams, steam pouring
out of the single nostril on the top of its head.
Despite the danger of
traversing the creature as it swung its body about violently, Argus was soon at
the head. He quickly holstered his pickaxe and unsheathed the sword on his
back. The sword was built out of a bone from a previously killed creature with
the edge made up of razor-sharp scales. He positioned the point of the sword
directly over the nostril on the creature’s head – the only vulnerable part on
the whole of the creature – and thrust downward. Rather than the whistle-like
scream from before, the creature let out a deep bellow. As Argus’ body vibrated
with the sound emanating from his prey, he pressed the sword deep into the
creature’s brain, dark green blood pouring out of its head. Now the creature’s
path was curving downward, unable to stay aloft through its mysterious means.
Argus held tight to his sword, as much for stability as to ensure the death of
his prey. Trees crashed around them as they plowed a path through the forest.
With a thunderous crash, the creature met the ground, though it continued
sliding for nearly a half-mile.
When the creature
finally came to a stop, Argus – who was quite exhausted at this point – pulled
out the mouth pipe from its loop on the left side of his belt. He took a deep
breath and let out four distinct calls, a pattern that was unique to successful
hunters. Soon, the village would arrive and help him harvest everything useful
from his kill. He slowly began his climb down from the top of the animal. On
the ground again, he took inventory of his extremities. Everything was
accounted for, though he did have a few minor cuts and scrapes. Argus had known
hunters that had lost fingers without realizing it, the thrill of the hunt had
been so strong. If he had any wounds that needed attention, now was the time
for it. However, without the need for first-aid, Argus sat down and leaned back
against a still upright tree as he waited for the others.
He did not have to
wait long. Just as he was truly getting comfortable, he heard the village’s
chief call to him.
“Argus!” the older man
called. “Quite the impressive jaub you have here.”
“Aye,” Argus called
back, turning in the direction of his elder tribesman. “It will sustain our
people for some time, Orion.”
“I think a jaub like
this will offer much in food and textiles.” Orion was now in front of Argus and
he extended his hand to help the other man to his feet. “I hope that the
benefits of this one will also be bounteous, but we will not know for certain
until we have sliced it open.”
“Please let me know
the quality of the jaub when the assessment has been completed. Now excuse me,
I must go and look for Eos.” Orion nodded and went to observe the deconstruction
and appraisal of the newly landed jaub while Argus wearily began looking for
his wife amongst the crowd that had formed. While he was searching, a hand
lightly touched his shoulder, causing him to turn and look for the hand’s
owner. He was met by the face of his wife, Eos, with her violet-grey eyes and
reddish-blonde hair (though a few streaks of white had started to come in). She
was carrying their young child, a boy named Aether.
“Quite the jaub you have
landed, Argus,” she said to him, proudly. She turned to face Aether, “Your
father is the best at finding and landing jaubs, young one.”
Argus looked at his
little family, happy that he could provide a good life for them through his
efforts. After all, everything comes from the jaubs that he lands: food,
clothing, tools, medicine, even materials for their houses. In the past,
hunters would go after other animals as prey, but no other creature provided as
much to men as jaubs did, so now that was the only prey worth going after. Once
the jaub was landed, other men and women of the village would deconstruct it
down to the various components to be used. The various insides, called
benefits, were especially valuable since they were essential components in
medicines. However, no part of the jaub could be utilized without the jaub
itself first being landed. In many ways, Argus thought, the hunter was the most
important role in the village.
With his wife and
child beside him, Argus slowly walked back to the village for a well-deserved
rest. The hunt would begin again soon, but for now, he would enjoy his time
off.
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I enjoyed this story. I hope you are sending it to a publisher.
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