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Friday, March 4, 2011

Column III

This one ruffled some feathers to the point that the director of Housing on campus responded with a letter to the editor.

Not bad.

3 comments:

  1. Whoa. Controversial. Do the other columnists ruffle feathers too?

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  2. I was impressed by your clear writing, local focus, and limited scope. At first I was a bit concerned that the letter to the editor raised issues that you didn't seem to have anticipated: security and grades. I realized, however, that your job was not to cover every possible aspect of the issue, but to raise the concern. Now, with two points of view available, readers can reach a more informed conclusion.
    If asked to edit this piece, I would have suggested two word changes: "pay" for "buy" in the sentence about the required food plan, and "shocked" or "upset" for outraged to avoid duplication with "outrageous."
    Overall, though, a good column.

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  3. that was sweet!
    fight the establishment
    especially when its lame!
    i loved it
    i give it a woot woot!

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